I appologize for being gone so long, but with everything that's been going on here I've been crazy busy. I am now back and working again. Reached the halfway point with the rewrite and increased the word count by 3,390 words! I am currently at 68,880 but I hoped to reach at least 75,000 by the time I am done.
The line behind darkness and light is not gray, just a little clouded.